Intimacy

Jul. 20th, 2011 11:28 pm
unodoseskimo: (duglasses)
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Title: Intimacy
Pairing: Junhyung / Hyunseung
Rating: PG
Summary: They’re a little too close, a little too intimate for being in such a public place. Based on Junseung jumping rope in this
Warnings/Notes: Drabble ~200 words, not proofread



They’re a little too close, a little too intimate for being in such a public place.

Hyunseung’s hands find their way to Junhyung’s shoulders

Too naturally.

I know.

He moves, fingers clenching against the muscle in the younger's shoulders as he shifts his weight to one leg, balancing himself. Junhyung catches his gaze for a moment too long and he’s forgetting to breathe and he’s forgetting about the crowd and he’s forgetting—oh yeah, to jump.

Screams and cheers flood his ears when they mess up once, and Junhyung just turns, laughing into his hand because how silly, Hyunseung had completely forgotten to jump.

And then he turns again, because that’s not fair the MC decides, and their eyes catch again.

I’m sorry.

It’s ok.


They move closer, Hyunseung’s hands a little less sure than before, gripping at the rough fabric of Junhyung’s vest, too tightly, too much. Then the rope is swinging overhead again and he remembers this time, just barely, to look down and not up and they make it. Once, twice, three times. The audience is counting in unison and it’s a mess of sounds drilling into Hyunseung’s head, and it may just keep his mind occupied enough to ignore the way Junhyung’s eyes are burning over his skin; to forget the way his muscles feel as he swings the rope around them. To just —and then Junhyung is moving closer, Hyunseung’s arm bending at the elbow as their shoulders almost brush, their breath mingles and it’s just too much.

I’m so, so sorry.

No, you’re not.


So Hyunseung pulls away again, and Junhyung’s face softens, eyes falling back to their feet and then it’s over.

Date: 2011-07-21 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] singoutloud25.livejournal.com
AKLSDHFKASHDFKLH This is BEAUTIFUL!!! Seriously, I love you for writing this!!! Thank you!!!

Date: 2011-07-21 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
I love YOU for liking it so much despite its ..lack of length OTL
<3

Date: 2011-07-21 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sephinaee.livejournal.com
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH<3
Everything is just perfect! I love your writing!

Date: 2011-07-21 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
-hug- ;__; thank you so much bb

Date: 2011-07-21 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badoy.livejournal.com
you are so fast! i cant...

Date: 2011-07-21 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeanica.livejournal.com
aww, this fanfic is love <3
Although short.. :P
I almost died while watching this fancam, seriously.

Date: 2011-07-21 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
I couldn't bring myself to write more than this. It was gonna turn into this 1,000+ word smut, but ehh. ;;
& seriously, that fancam, my fangirly heart couldn't take it l;skad

Date: 2011-07-21 10:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheecharon.livejournal.com
BEAUTIFUL ;_____;

Date: 2011-07-21 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] litoslaw.livejournal.com
awww, so lovely <3

Date: 2011-07-21 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clandestine-7.livejournal.com
That was absolutely lovely. So much intensity in such a short fic - I loved it! You have a really great way with words.

Date: 2011-07-21 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much sweetie ;o;

Date: 2011-07-21 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nysl2011.livejournal.com
OMG that is so cute
i watched the video too
i hope you write more of these based on videos
thanks

Date: 2011-07-23 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nevrek.livejournal.com
see, my problem is - idk whether this is a happy fic or an angsty fic so i'm crying and smiling at the same time. ಥ⌣ಥ your writing is so much perfection because it made me like this ಥ⌣ಥ

Date: 2011-07-23 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
I didn't really mean to write it as either, I just kind of wrote down what I observed/ my fangirly mind fabricated as I watched that fancam; but I think it came out angsty. orz ;~;

and lol oh god that face. tysm sweetie ♥

Date: 2011-08-07 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liet-ania.livejournal.com
This nearly made me cry 'cause seriously....it's so real. You portrayed the emotions so beautifully that it felt so real and even though it's short it shows so much. I love you<3.

Date: 2011-08-08 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unodoseskimo.livejournal.com
;____; -cling- no ily for such a beautiful comment
Thank you thank you thank you <33

Date: 2011-08-13 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liet-ania.livejournal.com
And I love you for such a beautiful fic =) <3.
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